“Come
on Teddalee!” Leesa’s eyes were wide with worry, as though she feared she
couldn’t hold off the nonexistent traffic much longer. Her purple backpack
sparkled in the bus’s headlights as she guided her six-year-old brother, whose
mind was always about three clicks ahead of his body, around the front of the
bus and up the steps.
Through
the window, Leesa successfully molded Teddy’s fingers into the proper sign. He
smashed it to the glass proudly.
I
returned it as the bus’s doors squeaked shut. With a jerk, the giant vehicle
roared to life and bounced down the street and out of sight.
With
that, my babies were gone. Safe on the bus that would take them to school. Far
away from the toxic environment of our happy
home.
There is more where this came from! Get back to the rest of the WeWriWa clan here!
Ouch - that's a very powerful final line.
ReplyDeleteThanks Peter!
DeleteWith the kids now safe at school, I wonder how she'll take care of the cheating husband? I don't think I'd want to be him right now. Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteHolding it together for the children even as her world shatters.
ReplyDeleteIs she going to get mad? Or is she going to get even? Even when her world is falling in on her, a mother still has to take care of the children. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteNow that the children are gone for a while, it sounds like it's time for a talk with the hubby.
ReplyDeleteShe did a great job, keeping it together for the kids. But now...oh, that man better run! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat description but ouch what a moment to lead up to. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThe irony of that last lines really grabbed my gut.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a collision course to serious sadness. It felt very real. Good writing. :-)
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